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It was a hot sunny day at the farm where Old Man Jenkins grew his apple orchard. But today would be different then most because today Old Man Jenkins neighbor Steve Hubs was hungry but couldn’t afford any food since he got fired from McDonalds. Steve hoped over the fence to the orchard while Mr. Jenkins was having supper. He then slowly snuck his way to the greatest apple tree in the orchard, because that’s where the best apples grew. Steve then took one of the most luscious apples he could find and bit into it. After all the time Steve took to find the tree and eat the apple, Old Man Jenkins had already finished eating his supper and came outside to pick some apples so his wife could make her delicious apple pie. Mr. Jenkins went straight to the great tree to get the most magnificent apples for the pie. When he got there he found Steve lying under the tree eating his apples. Old man Jenkins freaked out and yelled at Steve as he chased him around the farm. Steve tripped on a fallen apple and face planted into a tree. Jenkins started to scream at Steve until he saw the sad look in his eyes and felt bad for him so he told him he could’ve just asked him to have some apples and that he didn’t need to just come and steal them. Steve understood and promised not to sneak into his back yard ever again and left.
Friday, April 30, 2010
10 words I've never used in a story (incomplete)
Stevo’s Big Day
On April 22, 2010, a little boy the age of 23 named Stevo was walking down Saints street in West Hollywood, California. While walking he came across a homeless man with a sigh that said “Dude woah can somebody tell me what day it is.” Stevo told him it was May 14th, just to confuse him a little. The homeless man said “God bless you sir.” and handed Steve a beer bottle. He took it and started to drink it, but when it touched his tongue he found out it wasn’t actually beer, it was cherry Kool-Aid the worst kind. Stevie freaked and whipped the bottle at the hobos head, knocking him unconscious. Some homosexual freaked out and dialed 9-1-1. When the police came they arrested Steve and put him in the back of the cop car. On the way to the police station Stevo got hungry and asked one of the cops if he had anything to eat. The cop pulled out his spider-man lunch box and gave him some watermelon. While eating his delicious and juicy watermelon a bumblebee must of came in the car when Stevie was getting arrested because it flew onto his watermelon and poor little Steve bit right where it was that’s when the bumblebee stung his tongue causing him to scream and even start crying. The cops pulled over opened the door and asked what was wrong. Steve said in a sad voice that a bee stung him. The cops laughed and made fun of him. They told him he was too much of a baby to go to jail, so they let him go. He started to walk back home when he saw the homeless man again. The silly hobo sprinted as fast as he could towards Steve screaming like an Arabian suicide bomber. Stevo freaked out and beat the badonkadonk out of him. The poor little hobo was knocked unconscious again
On April 22, 2010, a little boy the age of 23 named Stevo was walking down Saints street in West Hollywood, California. While walking he came across a homeless man with a sigh that said “Dude woah can somebody tell me what day it is.” Stevo told him it was May 14th, just to confuse him a little. The homeless man said “God bless you sir.” and handed Steve a beer bottle. He took it and started to drink it, but when it touched his tongue he found out it wasn’t actually beer, it was cherry Kool-Aid the worst kind. Stevie freaked and whipped the bottle at the hobos head, knocking him unconscious. Some homosexual freaked out and dialed 9-1-1. When the police came they arrested Steve and put him in the back of the cop car. On the way to the police station Stevo got hungry and asked one of the cops if he had anything to eat. The cop pulled out his spider-man lunch box and gave him some watermelon. While eating his delicious and juicy watermelon a bumblebee must of came in the car when Stevie was getting arrested because it flew onto his watermelon and poor little Steve bit right where it was that’s when the bumblebee stung his tongue causing him to scream and even start crying. The cops pulled over opened the door and asked what was wrong. Steve said in a sad voice that a bee stung him. The cops laughed and made fun of him. They told him he was too much of a baby to go to jail, so they let him go. He started to walk back home when he saw the homeless man again. The silly hobo sprinted as fast as he could towards Steve screaming like an Arabian suicide bomber. Stevo freaked out and beat the badonkadonk out of him. The poor little hobo was knocked unconscious again
Thursday, April 8, 2010
THE SCARDY STUDENT
The Scaredy Student
By Theodore
Today was Jonathan Fitzpatrick’s first day of middle school and he wasn’t very excited. John had always been home schooled because he’s afraid of almost everything from African Americans too rainbows, he was even scared of paper and water because he didn’t know what exactly was on or in them. It was hard to wake Johnny up because you couldn’t make a loud noise or even touch him, it didn’t help that he was a heavy sleeper. As she got closer to the bed she stepped on their dogs chew toy and it woke Johhny up. Johnny screamed and yelled at the top of his lungs. Mrs. Fitzpatrick freaked out when he did this and she turn and ran. It only got worse from there when she ran towards the closet and tripped into the closet door setting off the trip wire, which Johnny used to stop monsters from eating him. When something sets off the wire a large metal spike falls down onto the person who broke the wire, lucky for Mrs. Fitzpatrick it didn’t it her in the head like it’s meant to, instead because she was lying down the spike went through her leg and she yelled so loud that neighbors phoned the police. But perhaps worse of all was that John woke up in the worse way possible. After the first scream his dad ran upstairs to see what was wrong and Jonathan had grabbed his 9mm handgun that was on his shelf and when Mr. Fitzpatrick walked through the door John emptied the whole clip on him. The police heard the shots and ran upstairs to find his dad lying in the hallway covered in blood and his mom next to the closet with a spike in her leg and there’s little John with a big smile on his face and a gun in his hand. One of the officers made him put his gun down while another checked his parent’s pulses and amazingly they were still alive. Lucky for Johnny he didn’t have to go to school until tomorrow. The next morning, John’s parents were still in the hospital so one of the doctors had to phone the house to get him to go to school, he was already awake so he went to get it. When the doctor told him he had to go to school the bus had just pulled up and honked the horn, so little J ran out the door and went on to the bus. Once on the bus the bus driver closed the doors and drove to school. That’s when Jonathan noticed that the bus he was on was filled with one of his three biggest fears, mentally handicapped people. He screamed as loud as he could which made the special needs kids start to scream which scared poor Johnny even more. The driver stomped on the breaks and all the kids fell to the floor. The driver asked John what’s wrong and John asked why everyone was retarded. The driver told him it was called a short bus and it’s for all the mentally challenged kids in school. Right after he said that one of the special boys jumped onto Johns back and started yelling in his ear. As John whipped and rolled around the bus the retard just wouldn’t let go so John took drastic measures. He whipped out his switch blade and stabbed the kid repeatedly 12 times in the arm, back and once in the head. The kid fell off him… dead. The driver threw Johnny out the window and drove off as fast as he could. John got up slowly and started walking home. On the way home he passed by the park and thought it would be fun to go on the jungle gym for the first time in his life. This is where John will have to face his second biggest fear, large random explosions. Johnny wanted to try the slide first, what he didn't know was that his creepy uncle Yumatchy was trying to kill him for putting his sister, Johns mom, in the hospital. Yumatchy had planted a remote detonated mine at the bottom of the slide under the pebbles. Lucky for John Yamatchy over reacted and set it off when he was only a quarter way down the slide. The explosion blew off the bottom part or the slide and scared Johnny to death, not literally. John got up and started sprinting to the entrance. When he left the park, John slowed down a bit and started speed walking towards the police station. On the way he passed by some bushes, Jonathan is usually terrified of bushes, but he didn't really notice because he was only thinking about the explosions that nearly put him in the hospital like his parents. What he didn't know was that his crazy uncle Yumatchy was hiding in the bush knowing that he would have to walk by them to get to the police station. Yumatchy knew Johns biggest fear of all, someone jumping out of a bush screaming like a maniac with a large knife, and he was about to have his biggest fear exposed. Yumatchy leaped out of the bush and started swinging his knife. Johnny instantly made a fist and punched his uncle in the face, knocking him out and leaving him on the sidewalk. John went into the police station and had two officers come and take Yumatchy to prison for attempted murder. Johnny decided to go and visit his mom and dad in the hospital. When he walked in and saw a lady at the front desk. He asked which room his parents were in. The lady asked what there names were. Johnny told her "The Fitzparicks." The look on the womans face looked like she was about to go into shock. She looked down at John and said to him in a soft voice "Little boy I'm sorry to tell you, but your parents are both dead." John fell to his knees and fainted. When he woke up he was on a bed with a nurse standing over him asking if he was alright. He yelled no and ran out of the hospital with tears rolling down his face. He ran all the way home and into his room. John lied in his bed, pouring tears onto his pillow. He looked around and saw his parents blood stains on the floor and walls and he cried some more. He cried so much that he ran out of tears and started crying blood. He got up and walked out his back door to walk around his backyard. When he walked outside his crazy uncle Yumatchy was standing there with handcuffs hanging from his right hand. Yumatchy yelled in a angry voice that he escaped from the prison and he's here to get his revenge for killing his sister. Yumatchy pulled out a cage and opened it. Then eight wolverines jumped out and ripped poor Johnny to peices. Johnny died instantly.
THE END
By Theodore
Today was Jonathan Fitzpatrick’s first day of middle school and he wasn’t very excited. John had always been home schooled because he’s afraid of almost everything from African Americans too rainbows, he was even scared of paper and water because he didn’t know what exactly was on or in them. It was hard to wake Johnny up because you couldn’t make a loud noise or even touch him, it didn’t help that he was a heavy sleeper. As she got closer to the bed she stepped on their dogs chew toy and it woke Johhny up. Johnny screamed and yelled at the top of his lungs. Mrs. Fitzpatrick freaked out when he did this and she turn and ran. It only got worse from there when she ran towards the closet and tripped into the closet door setting off the trip wire, which Johnny used to stop monsters from eating him. When something sets off the wire a large metal spike falls down onto the person who broke the wire, lucky for Mrs. Fitzpatrick it didn’t it her in the head like it’s meant to, instead because she was lying down the spike went through her leg and she yelled so loud that neighbors phoned the police. But perhaps worse of all was that John woke up in the worse way possible. After the first scream his dad ran upstairs to see what was wrong and Jonathan had grabbed his 9mm handgun that was on his shelf and when Mr. Fitzpatrick walked through the door John emptied the whole clip on him. The police heard the shots and ran upstairs to find his dad lying in the hallway covered in blood and his mom next to the closet with a spike in her leg and there’s little John with a big smile on his face and a gun in his hand. One of the officers made him put his gun down while another checked his parent’s pulses and amazingly they were still alive. Lucky for Johnny he didn’t have to go to school until tomorrow. The next morning, John’s parents were still in the hospital so one of the doctors had to phone the house to get him to go to school, he was already awake so he went to get it. When the doctor told him he had to go to school the bus had just pulled up and honked the horn, so little J ran out the door and went on to the bus. Once on the bus the bus driver closed the doors and drove to school. That’s when Jonathan noticed that the bus he was on was filled with one of his three biggest fears, mentally handicapped people. He screamed as loud as he could which made the special needs kids start to scream which scared poor Johnny even more. The driver stomped on the breaks and all the kids fell to the floor. The driver asked John what’s wrong and John asked why everyone was retarded. The driver told him it was called a short bus and it’s for all the mentally challenged kids in school. Right after he said that one of the special boys jumped onto Johns back and started yelling in his ear. As John whipped and rolled around the bus the retard just wouldn’t let go so John took drastic measures. He whipped out his switch blade and stabbed the kid repeatedly 12 times in the arm, back and once in the head. The kid fell off him… dead. The driver threw Johnny out the window and drove off as fast as he could. John got up slowly and started walking home. On the way home he passed by the park and thought it would be fun to go on the jungle gym for the first time in his life. This is where John will have to face his second biggest fear, large random explosions. Johnny wanted to try the slide first, what he didn't know was that his creepy uncle Yumatchy was trying to kill him for putting his sister, Johns mom, in the hospital. Yumatchy had planted a remote detonated mine at the bottom of the slide under the pebbles. Lucky for John Yamatchy over reacted and set it off when he was only a quarter way down the slide. The explosion blew off the bottom part or the slide and scared Johnny to death, not literally. John got up and started sprinting to the entrance. When he left the park, John slowed down a bit and started speed walking towards the police station. On the way he passed by some bushes, Jonathan is usually terrified of bushes, but he didn't really notice because he was only thinking about the explosions that nearly put him in the hospital like his parents. What he didn't know was that his crazy uncle Yumatchy was hiding in the bush knowing that he would have to walk by them to get to the police station. Yumatchy knew Johns biggest fear of all, someone jumping out of a bush screaming like a maniac with a large knife, and he was about to have his biggest fear exposed. Yumatchy leaped out of the bush and started swinging his knife. Johnny instantly made a fist and punched his uncle in the face, knocking him out and leaving him on the sidewalk. John went into the police station and had two officers come and take Yumatchy to prison for attempted murder. Johnny decided to go and visit his mom and dad in the hospital. When he walked in and saw a lady at the front desk. He asked which room his parents were in. The lady asked what there names were. Johnny told her "The Fitzparicks." The look on the womans face looked like she was about to go into shock. She looked down at John and said to him in a soft voice "Little boy I'm sorry to tell you, but your parents are both dead." John fell to his knees and fainted. When he woke up he was on a bed with a nurse standing over him asking if he was alright. He yelled no and ran out of the hospital with tears rolling down his face. He ran all the way home and into his room. John lied in his bed, pouring tears onto his pillow. He looked around and saw his parents blood stains on the floor and walls and he cried some more. He cried so much that he ran out of tears and started crying blood. He got up and walked out his back door to walk around his backyard. When he walked outside his crazy uncle Yumatchy was standing there with handcuffs hanging from his right hand. Yumatchy yelled in a angry voice that he escaped from the prison and he's here to get his revenge for killing his sister. Yumatchy pulled out a cage and opened it. Then eight wolverines jumped out and ripped poor Johnny to peices. Johnny died instantly.
THE END
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